FWIW, I found the actual text perfectly clear; it was indeed the discussion
that was confusing. I wouldn't object to further clarification, but I
don't have text to propose, either. Do you?
It's hard to propose text that says what you mean when I don't know what you
mean (and cannot determine it from the text that is written).
I can certainly propose text that (I believe) says what _I_ think it should say.
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