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Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.
* IANA considerations
The IANA considerations section does not specify the namespace from
which allocation is requested for the AVPs and the message types.
* Section 4.2 Failover Session Response
This sentence has a typo and does not read well
"It is not required to respond one FSQ message with just on FSR."
I suggest removing it altogether so that the text will simply read
"An endpoint MAY choose to respond to an FSQ message with multiple FSR
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