Hi Peter,
I'm fine with all of your suggestion. Thanks for the review.
Donald
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On Fri, Apr 25, 2014 at 1:30 AM, Peter Yee <peter(_at_)akayla(_dot_)com> wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.
Document: draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: April-24-2014
IETF LC End Date: May-21-2014
IESG Telechat date: TBD
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current
Practice, but has some nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready
with nits.]
This document provides the IANA Considerations for two registries covering
the IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011 CFM OpCode and TLV Type blocks assigned to the
IETF.
Nits:
Most comments that follow are for alignment with the terminology and usage
found in IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011.
General: globally replace "Continuity" with "Connectivity".
General: globally replace "Codepoints" with "Code Points".
General: globally replace "Op-Code" with "OpCode".
Page 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "IANA Consideration" to "IANA
Considerations".
Page 5, 1st paragraph: end the reference with a period.
Page 5, 2nd paragraph: replace "Mansfield, S." with "and S. Mansfield" to
match http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt. Hey, I'm running out
of nits to pick here. :-)
-Peter Yee