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Document: draft-ietf-jose-json-web-algorithms-31
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2014-9-1
IETF LC End Date: 2014-9-3
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Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
1. Section 4.8 "This section defines the specifies" should be
"specifics"
2. Section 5.2.2 "Section 5.2.3 and Section 5.2.5" should be "through"
since 5.2.4 also defines instances.
3. Section 5.2.2.1 in bullet 1 "the values of these parameters are
specified by the AEAD algorithms (in Section 5.2.3 and Section 5.2.5)". Did
you mean AEAD in which case is should be expanded and a reference is
probably needed or do you need to change it to Authenticated Encryption?
Also the "and" should be "through" same as previous comment.
4. In section 5.2.2.1 bullet 4 for "number of bits in A" I had to go to
bullet 5 to see what A is. Maybe add also here "additional authenticated
data"