hi, I've addressed comments received so far during the last
call and given that there are several different changes I've filed a
new draft 17. There is still an ongoing discussion on i18n
requirements and I expect that there will be a new draft following on.
draft-pechanec-pkcs11uri-17.txt contains the following
changes:
- slot attributes added to identify a PKCS#11 slot
- some minor editorial changes as suggested by Derek Atkins
- IANA registration template added to the draft itself as
suggested by Martin Duerst.
- normative language used as per RFC2119 as suggested by Sarah
Banks
- IRIs (RFC3987) are referenced per Nico Williams's suggestion
- a syntax error found by Shawn Emery fixed in the ABNF grammar
- ABNF was simplified as suggested by the ABNF check tool
http://tools.ietf.org/tools/bap/abnf.cgi (I replaced "*1(xx)" with "[
xx ]")
- text notes that use of "x-*" attributes is obsolete and
should be avoided as per BCP178. Based on a comment by Bjoern
Hoehrmann.
- a new section on generating PKCS#11 URIs added based on
initial comment by Henry B. Hotz.
direct link to the diff from the previous version:
http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-pechanec-pkcs11uri-16&url2=draft-pechanec-pkcs11uri-17
best regards, Jan.
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Jan Pechanec <jan(_dot_)pechanec(_at_)oracle(_dot_)com>