On 09/12/2011 09:08 AM, John R. Levine wrote:
These are the comments on the DNSBL BCP. I think they are minor enough
that we can just ask the RFC editor to deal with them.
Didn't I already deal with these and upload the changes?
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Date: Mon, 25 Jul 2011 17:32:47 +0200
From: Olivier Festor <Olivier(_dot_)Festor(_at_)inria(_dot_)fr>
To: Lars Eggert <lars(_dot_)eggert(_at_)nokia(_dot_)com>,
"<irsg(_at_)irtf(_dot_)org>" <irsg(_at_)irtf(_dot_)org>
Cc: Olivier Festor <Olivier(_dot_)Festor(_at_)loria(_dot_)fr>
Subject: [irsg] Comments on draft-irtf-asrg-bcp-blacklists-09
Dear Lars
Please find below my comments following the review of
draft-irtf-asrg-bcp-blacklists-09.
Overall the document is of good quality and contains useful information
for DNSBL operators as well as users. References are accurate.
I will also upload the comments on the tracking system as soon as I
found out how to do it ;-)
Best Regards
/Olivier Festor
Detailed comments :
Introduction
RHSBL :
->give a description of what RHS means like it was done for WL in the
DNSWL (WL = White List)
2.1.2 "Audit Trail SHOULD be maintained"
-> to be consistent with the other subsections, use capitals on words
2.1.3 3rd paragraph
"This has resulted in some labeling such practises by the ....."
-> Alternative 1: "This has resulted in some labeling of such practises
by the ....."
-> Alternative 2: Alternative 1: "This has resulted in labeling such
practises by the ....."
2.2.2 3rd parapgrah
The term "DDoS" has not been defined before in the document
2.2.5 3rd paragraph
"Colloqially, " it smells bad""
While I personaly like the statement, I am wondering if it fits in a
standard document.
3.3
What is the semantics of the proposed "test" entry in DNSBLs. What
should be in the associated A record ? Is is recommended as a
replacement of the 127.0.0.0/8 test approaches or as a complement ?
3.5 "Listing of Special and Reserved IP Addresses MUST be disclosed"
- to be consistent with the other subsections, use capitals on words
3.6.1 "MUST NOT scan without provocation"
- to be consistent with the other subsections, use capitals on words
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