Friends -
Here is a partial list of changes that I've made for
draft-ietf-marid-protocol-01:
Major Changes
* Adjusted domain-spec and macro-string ABNF to remove ambiguity
about slash and percent characters, and the ambiguity with domain
names
* Specified handling of DNS server errors during mechanism evaluation
* Changed recommendation to keeping name and record combined length
less than 460 characters to keep with the DNS UDP limit of 512
octets
Descriptive Changes
* Changed the title to:
"The Sender-ID Record: Format and Interpretation"
* Added a statement about URLs to the Security Considerations,
and additional information in the exp= modifier
* Added a statement about publishing of wildcard records
* Added a statement about location of records
* Clarified discussion of expansions for exp modifier
* Clarified discussion of splitting on delimiters in macro expansion
* Clarified definition of SoftFail
* Reformatted the table describing "include" processing results
Minor Changes
* Reformatted using xml2rfc. This resulted in several changes:
- boilerplate text and formatting improved
- some slight changes in the ascii artwork
- minor formatting changes
* Spelling fixes and minor grammar fixes
In addition, I'm still working on these changes:
* Change the version string, add a minor version number field
* Add a statement about new mechanisms
* Add information from DNS-EXT folks
* Add IANA info to request new RR type
I expect all of this to be done and submitted to the draft editor by
end of day Friday.
- Mark
Mark Lentczner
http://www.ozonehouse.com/mark/
markl(_at_)glyphic(_dot_)com