Hi,
Here are comments on the format 06 draft.
(1) Sec 3.4
As I pointed out in the IETF meeting, this section would mislead
readers. Please clarify that UTF-8 is used for fields of PGP packets,
not for message itself.
(2) Sec 6.2
It is nice if the following note is included:
Note: PGP 2.x uses "BEGIN PGP MESSAGE" for detached
signatures.
This may be included in Sec 14.
This change must be clarified in the next draft of PGP/MIME since
PGP/MIME relies on detached signatures.
(3) Sec 6.2
Again, usage of UTF-8 should be clarified for "Charset".
(4) Sec 7
In the last item, "the ASCII armored signature" is a little bit
ambiguous. For readability, "BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE" should be explicitly
referred.
--Kazu