RE: WG Last Call:draft-ietf-smime-cms-07.txt1998-11-09 20:06:23
Bill:
Are we alking about the same sentence? It looks okay to me.
At 04:17 PM 11/3/98 -0500, Flanigan, Bill wrote: >I have another "minor" request. The last sentence of the second paragraph >in Section 5.6 seems to be particularly convoluted--like nested eggs. How >would this process REALLY work in determining if the signature is valid? >Perhaps some wordsmithing as well as breaking the sentence up into two might >help. Any thoughts anyone? > >Bill > >%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% >William F. Flanigan, Jr., Ph.D. Voice: (703) 681-2318 >Defense Information Systems Agency Fax: (703) 681-2814 >Information Assurance Office (JED) DSN: 761 >5600 Columbia Pike, Room 632 Voice Mail: (703) 681-2318 >Falls Church, VA 22041-2717 Internet: <flanigab(_at_)ncr(_dot_)disa(_dot_)mil> >%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: >> Sent: >> To: >> Subject: >> >> >One minor request, would it be possible to include a short example of >> data >> >wrapped up with each CMS content-type at the end of the draft (data, >> >encryptedData, etc)? This would help solve some of the "we thought you >> were >> >supposed to interpret the text this way" problems which have come up, and >> >provide useful test vectors for implementors. >> >> I would second this request, even if it delays the drafts a bit. From >> Jim's >> previous message, it is clear that the few people implementing right now >> are not 100% on track on this. >> >> Russ, can you add these? Or, if anyone else can provide them quicker, that >> would be wonderful. >> >> --Paul Hoffman, Director >> --Internet Mail Consortium
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