Changes:
1. Section 2.1.7 missing a return on the pubInfo Paragraph.
2. ASN formatting issue. Should be another return and indentation for a2 42
<CR> 04 40
3. General statment: I don't like formulas of the format "ZZ = a ^ b (mod
p)". This does not make sense to me from my old days in math class. Should
this be written as "ZZ = (a ^ x) mod p" which corresponds to what my math
teacher said? (I never got into the high level math courses in college.)
4. Section 2.1.1 - reverse the definitions of j and q so that j has a
definition on the same line.
5. Section 2.1.2 - new text on counter issue.
counter is a 32 bit number, represented in network byte order. Its
initial value is 1 for any ZZ, i.e. the byte sequence 00 00 00 01
(hex),
and it is incremented by one every time the above key generation
function is run for a given KEK.
6. Section 2.1.7 remove the phase "first invocation" in reference to SHA
hashing, there is no second invocation for RC2.
7. Section 2.2.2 - bullet #2 - What is the "seed 'seed'" string for. I
don't follow why the word is there twice.
8. Security Considerations -- I have a problem with the concept of placing
SHOULD and MAY in this section. This is suppose to be an advisary section
and I am not sure we want to try and get two implementations that actually
deal with the suggested text.
9. Section 2.2.1.1 - I would recommend changing '160] 2^' to '160] * 2^'
10. Section 2.2.1.1 - In step 10 the string starting with "Note" is in
twice. One should be removed.
jim,