Things are better -- here are my text comments.
1. Section 5.4: In the fragment
"The IMPLICIT  tag in the signedAttributes is not used for the
change to signedAttrs
2. Section 9.1: The description of items from originatorInfo to
authAttrs should be outdented one level.
3. Section 10.1.6: Insert a blank line before the ASN.
4. Security considerations: Contains a reference to section 12.6
5. I think that the OID defined for ContentInfo in the x400 documents
should be copied into the second on ContentInfo.
From -00 comments
35) Section 11: Update RFC 2459 text reference to "Son of 2459".