The document uses the term "transport" correctly.
Chapter 1, from which the sentences in the mail message were drawn, clearly
states that the term transport refers to a "SCSI transport", a phrase which
it defines accurately. The mail message did omit several sentences from
Chapter 1, including the sentences that defined "SCSI transport" and made it
clear that that's the kind of transport under discussion in the offending
sentence. Perhaps it should have included the whole chapter verbatim.
Are you objecting to the actual document, namely
draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-20.pdf, or only to the mail message that accompanied
it?
dj
In the context of an *Internet* RFC, it seems sensible to use the normal
Internet terminology -- unless one very very clearly indicates that a
term is being used in some different semantic.
-----Original Message-----
From: Loa Andersson [mailto:loa(_at_)pi(_dot_)se]
Sent: Friday, February 14, 2003 2:43 AM
To: RJ Atkinson
Cc: Mallikarjun C.; Bob Braden; sob(_at_)harvard(_dot_)edu;
mankin(_at_)psg(_dot_)com;
ips(_at_)ece(_dot_)cmu(_dot_)edu; ietf(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org
Subject: Re: Protocol Action: iSCSI to Proposed Standard
Ran,
would agree to this, and put even stronger
"... Internet RFCs the normal Inernet terminology SHOULD be used, unless
there
are very stong and explicitly stated reasons not to ..."
it should als be that the I* have a guiding role in this
/Loa
RJ Atkinson wrote:
On Wednesday, Feb 12, 2003, at 13:24 America/Montreal, Mallikarjun C.
wrote:
All the Internet documentation with which I am familiar, as well as the
I think we have a case of overlapping vocabulary from two different
domains.
Per SCSI Architecture Model (SAM-2, SAM-3), iSCSI is very clearly
a "SCSI transport protocol" (as opposed to a SCSI application layer
protocol).
Parallel SCSI, Fibre Channel etc. are all "SCSI transports" per SCSI
conventions.
That is all the critiqued abstract is trying to describe.
In the context of an *Internet* RFC, it seems sensible to use the normal
Internet terminology -- unless one very very clearly indicates that a
term is being used in some different semantic. One might postulate that
the document's editors and RFC-Editor could work out a mutually agreeable
editorial change here to add clarity.
Ran