I am basically OK with this document.
Some comments you may consider though:
- Should you add aa [TODO] to section 5.1 which states that
the editor of the document should describe the Textual
Conventions (if any) in the MIB module?
- I wonder if guidance is needed that they can leave out sect
5.1 if there are no TCs at all.
- in Sect 5.3, would it make sense to advise to also describe
the tables (and their relationships to each other)?
I think that such would be useful.
- In sect 5.3, it might be good to suggest that the editor
explains how congestion control is addressed for notifications
(as per RFC2914)
Bert Wijnen
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