Comment to the draft received from Tim Polk during review:
I thought I might follow up on the first unaddressed comment:
I notice that the phrase "the Initial Archive Timestamp" frequently
appears in the text with a capitalized 'I' in word "initial". This
seems
to indicate that there *is* something special about this timestamp,
and I
would expect to find a definition in the terminology section.
Perhaps a lowercase 'i' would more clearly indicate that it is simply
a
subtype with the same structure? That is, if the phrase was "the
initial
Archive Timestamp", I would only expect to find "Archive Timestamp" in
the
terminology section. (Actually, the phrase appears with a lowercase
'i'
twice - once in section 1.2 and again in 5.2. I assume there is no
difference?)
Thanks,
Tim Polk
Answer from I-D author:
Hi Tim,
I agree with you, and follow your comment and will make sure in the
final
revision of the draft that the word "initial" of the "initial Archive
Timestamp" only starts with a capital letter at the beginning of a
sentence.
Thanks, Tobias
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