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RE: Last Call: draft-ietf-ltans-ers (Evidence Record Syntax (ERS)) to Proposed Standard - comment from Tim and answer

2007-03-13 07:26:19
Comment to the draft received from Tim Polk during review:

I thought I might follow up on the first unaddressed comment:

I notice that the phrase "the Initial Archive Timestamp" frequently 
appears in the text with a capitalized 'I' in word "initial".  This
seems 
to indicate that there *is* something special about this timestamp,
and I 
would expect to find a definition in the terminology section.

Perhaps a lowercase 'i' would more clearly indicate that it is simply
a 
subtype with the same structure?  That is, if the phrase was "the
initial 
Archive Timestamp", I would only expect to find "Archive Timestamp" in
the  
terminology section.  (Actually, the phrase appears with a lowercase
'i' 
twice - once in section 1.2 and again in 5.2.  I assume there is no 
difference?)

Thanks,

Tim Polk

Answer from I-D author:
Hi Tim,

I agree with you, and follow your comment and will make sure in the
final 
revision of the draft that the word "initial" of the "initial Archive 
Timestamp" only starts with a capital letter at the beginning of a 
sentence.

Thanks, Tobias


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