I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-avt-topologies-06.txt
For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Summary: This draft is very well written, an enjoyable read and is
almost ready for publication except for a minor comment.
Minor
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ASM is a term commonly used in multicast to mean Any Source Multicast
(as opposed to Source Specific Multicast). The glossary of this draft
redefines this to be "Asynchronous Multicast". Is this just a typo?
Because from my reading of the draft all instances of this acronym
actually use it in the context of Any Source Multicast. If it is just a
typo it can be fixed with just an RFC-Editor note.
Cheers
Suresh
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