Authors,
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-enum-combined-08.txt
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: 10 June 2008
IETF LC End Date: 16 June 2008
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Comments:
This is a reasonably straightforward draft describing use of
e164.arpa for an interim Infrastructure ENUM solution. Pragmatism
outweighs elegance in this domain (e.g., the variable-length
structure of country codes), and this draft outlines a reasonable
pragmatic solution to the problem it addresses.
This draft is in very good shape - kudos to the authors.
A DNS Directorate review should be obtained for this draft.
The UK (+44) phone numbers used in examples are not on the
ID-Checklist's list of fictitious phone numbers, but consulting
the UK Ofcom's official list (linked to the ID-Checklist)
reveals that the number are in fact fictitious. This is fine.
idnits 2.08.10 found three rather minor items that only need
to be addressed if a new version of the draft is prepared for
other reasons, as the RFC Editor will handle these in the
normal course of editing:
== The copyright year in the IETF Trust Copyright Line does not match
the
current year
== Outdated reference: draft-ietf-enum-infrastructure-enum-reqs has
been
published as RFC 5067
== Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of
draft-ietf-enum-infrastructure-06
Thanks,
--David
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