Elwyn,
Thank you. I have incorporated your editorial notes below into the
xml source.
best regards,
Brian Adamson
adamson(_at_)itd(_dot_)nrl(_dot_)navy(_dot_)mil
On Jun 27, 2008, at 3:04 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
posting a new version of the draft.
Document: draft-ietf-rmt-bb-norm-revised-05.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 27 June 2008
IESG Telechat date: 3 July 2008
Summary:
Ready. This update has addressed all the issues I raised in my LC
review excellently.
There are a couple of new and a couple of legacy editorial nits....
Editorial:
s2.4: s/specify use/specify use of/
s3.2.3.1, para 1, last line: s/provided/providing/
s8: s/George, Gross/George Gross/?
s5, end of para 3: s/if this acceptable/if this is acceptable/
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