Hi.
I've just reposted this draft as
draft-klensin-rfc5378var-01.txt. I didn't removing the material
I indicated I was going to remove because this version follows
too quickly on the previous one.
There are only two sets of changes, but the first seemed
sufficiently important to be worth a quick update:
(1) Alfred Hoenes caught several places in which I had
transposed digits or otherwise fouled up RFC numbers to which I
was making reference. This type of work is sufficiently
confusing without that sort of stupid problem, for which I
apologize -- I thought I had proofread it carefully enough but
obviously did not. They have been fixed.
(2) I realized that it was necessary for completeness to
un-obsolete 3948 and 4748 if they were going to be referenced,
or material from them picked up and copied into, documents, so I
have inserted a paragraph to take care of that.
Anyone who has successful read the -00 version and understood it
can safely ignore this one. Anyone who has not yet read -00, or
who tried to read it and was confused by the numbering errors,
may find this version more helpful.
Comments are, of course, welcome on either one.
john
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