I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-idnabis-rationale-13
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2009-Oct-13
IETF LC End Date: 2009-Oct-13
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.
Note: This draft is tightly intertwined with other IDNABIS drafts that
I assume to be progressing together. I reviewed this draft on it's
own, and only referenced the others when needed to understand this
one. I explicitly did _not_ verify that the information in this draft
is consistent with the others.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
-- Section 3.1.2.2, 2nd paragraph:
This paragraph seems redundant with the preceding one.
-- Section 3.1.3, first bullet in list:
Please expand NFKC on first use.
-- section 7.1.1, first paragraph: "...defined in the "Protocol" and
"Tables" documents"
Reference forms inconsistent with other references to these same docs
elsewhere in the draft.
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