I am sorry I got the wrong subject list for this. IT was a different draft
I was trying to deal with. I will look at this document soon.
Jim
-----Original Message-----
From: Suresh Krishnan [mailto:suresh(_dot_)krishnan(_at_)ericsson(_dot_)com]
Sent: Thursday, May 06, 2010 10:26 AM
To: Jim Schaad
Cc: 'IETF discussion list'
Subject: Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-csi-send-cert (Certificate profile
and certificate management for SEND) to Proposed Standard
Hi Jim,
I think you are commenting on the wrong document. You probably meant
to comment on draft-housley-cms-content-constraints-extn whose last
call
period ended on April 19th.
Thanks
Suresh
On 10-05-06 12:06 AM, Jim Schaad wrote:
I have the following comments on this document
1. I find the following statement ambiguous:
CCC is not used to constrain MIME encapsulated data, i.e., MIME
wrapping layers are not processed with regard to CCC.
I do not know if this means that processing is to stop at a MIME
encapsulation layer, or if it means that the id-data content type
cannot be
constrained. (Or perhaps both meanings are correct.) IF the first
is meant
I would suggest "CCC processing stops when a MIME encapsulation layer
is
encountered." If the second is meant then it should say "CCC cannot
be used
to constrain the creation of the id-data content type."
2. It is my personal opinion that the algorithm as described is
overly
confusing. I was able to fully understand the procedure only by
interacting
with the authors and not from the document. While there have been
some
changes to the text since that time, I do not believe that the basic
problems with making the algorithm clear have been addressed in the
document. I did supply what I considered to be a much simpler
version of
the algorithm to the authors, but they decided not to make the
changes that
I outlined in my suggested text.
Jim
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