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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
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Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-meth-21
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:
IETF LC End Date: 2010-06-25
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
There are some nits.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
1. All over the document there are abbreviations that are not expanded in
full the first time they are used or at all. Examples are DUT, BMWG,.. I
suggest that the editor will go through the document and specify all
abbreviations.
2. In section 4.1 the draft mention to loss-derived and Rate-Derived
methods. There is a reference to Rate-Derive method later in the section but
no reference to loss-derived method.
3. I saw the reference to draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-term-20, which
is a work in progress, when looking for Rate-derived Method and noticed that
part of the text in 6.2.1 is copied from the terminology document. I agree
that it makes it easier to read this document if the text is copied but
maybe add a note that will say which one is the right one in case the
terminology draft will change before it is published.
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