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Document: draft-mrw-nat66-08
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2011-03-01
IETF LC End Date: 2011-03-02
IESG Telechat date: 2011-03-03
(Note: The Last Call deadline and the Telechat are only a day apart, so this
review serves both purpose)
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an experimental RFC. I have a
few nit comments that could probably be dealt with in Auth48 or by the RFC
editori
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
-- 1.1, 4 paragraphs from end:
Please expand RIR on first mention.
-- 1.2, 2nd paragraph: "... and the defined address mapping mechanism is
checksum-neutral."
Redundant with previous paragraph.
-- 5, third bullet: "An application instance wishing to establish communication
with a peer which is "behind" an NPTv6 Translator ..."
s / which / that
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