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Document: draft-shiomoto-ccamp-switch-programming-05
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2011-07-14
IETF LC End Date: 2011-07-18
Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
-- section 1, paragraph 4: "...with relation to the programming..."
... in relation to...
-- 3.1, last paragraph:
Note that the references say SHOULD rather than MUST. Using "must not" here,
even non-normatively, seems a bit overstated.
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