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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-sidr-ghostbusters-13.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel(_dot_)a(_dot_)garcia(_at_)ericsson(_dot_)com>
Review Date: 2011-09-19
IETF LC End Date: 2011-09-28
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- The Introduction section (Section 1), should be informative by nature.
Therefore, I do not expect to see normative text written in there. So, I
suggest to move the 7th paragraph in Section 1 to elsewhere in the
document, since it contains the normative word "MAY".
- The document contains a normative reference to itself (first normative
reference). That is a kind of a loop. It is used in Section 8.3, IANA
registration of a new media type. It could be safely replaced by "[This
Document]".
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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