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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
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Document: draft-ietf-genarea-milestones-tool-05
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2011-09-29
IETF LC End Date: 2011-09-21
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
-- Abstract:
The abstract should mention that this updates 6292.
-- section 3, last paragraph, last sentence: "A WG chair also needs to be able
to delete one or more existing milestones."
That sentence seems redundant with the last sentence of the previous paragraph
-- section 4, last paragraph: "After this tool is launched, the IETF
Secretariat will no longer need to post a change to the database: the tool will
do this without intervention by the Secretariat."
Except in the aforementioned case of the secretariat doing this to fix a
problem or in an emergency.
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