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please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
receive.
Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-vbr-audio-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2011-10-21
IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-24
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a BCP.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
-- section 1, paragraph 2: "...can be recognised with high accuracy…"
That seems like a bit more than a "small amount of information"
-- section 2, 1st paragraph: "… is already considered a hard problem"
Who considers it?
-- section 4, last paragraph: "It is, however, still expected…"
Who expects it?
-- section 6:
It might be worth mentioning that this entire draft is about security.
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