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2012-01-24 05:18:22
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

 

Document: draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-06

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2012-1-24

IETF LC End Date: 2012-2-14

IESG Telechat date:

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC.

 

Major issues:

 

 

Minor issues:

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 

1.       Section 2 bullet 3 "Securty"?

2.       In section 4.1 "The inverse function is defined such that the sum
of an element and  its inverse is "0":" . This looks like a zero to me and I
assume you meant the letter "o"

 

 

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