I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Sorry for the late review due to IET meeting.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ancp-pon-02
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2012-4-1
IETF LC End Date: 2012-3-30
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
In section 4 "However, the broadcast capability on the PON enables the AN
(OLT) to send one copy on the PON as opposed to N copies of a multicast
channel on the PON serving N premises being receivers" I think the "being"
before the last word should be deleted
General editorial comment is about page breaks which can be better like
section 7 title is at the end of a page and the text is in the next page.
Also some of the figures and their descriptions are split between pages.