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Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02

2013-07-02 10:34:07
a new version addressing your review is on its way.

Johannes


Roni Even schrieb am 30.06.2013 08:44:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, 
please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may 
receive.

Document: draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–6–30

IETF LC End Date: 2013-7–23

IESG Telechat date:

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

In section 1 you reference TLS 1.0 and 1.1 usage based on RFC 4492. What 
about TLS 1.2 usage specified in RFC5246 A.7

 

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 1. In section 3 the  registry name is EC Named Curve
 2. In section 3 change “suitability” to “suitable”

 



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