So this doesn't get lost, here comments I sent to the authors before starting
IETF last call...
Dan will probably want to update his coordinates.
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You don't need to be so enthusiastic with your acronyms in Section 1.2
The following are "well known" according to
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt
GMPLS Generalized MPLS
LDP Label Distribution Protocol
MPLS Multiprotocol Label Switching
There is a serial comma missing from
OAM Operations, Administration and Maintenance
The comma is also missing in your text.
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In Section 1.3 you say
There is no definition for MPLS TE-LSP support of multipoint-to-
multipoint connectivity and none is anticipated.
Without opening up a discussion of whether what you cay is true, can you
say why it is relevant? Perhaps "This document is limited to a
discussion of point-to-multipoint function and does not discuss
multipoint-to-multipoint support." You might also move this to Section
1.1.
-----Original Message-----
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Subject: [mpls] Last Call: <draft-ietf-mpls-tp-p2mp-framework-05.txt> (A
Framework for Point-to-Multipoint MPLS in Transport Networks) to Informational
RFC
The IESG has received a request from the Multiprotocol Label Switching WG
(mpls) to consider the following document:
- 'A Framework for Point-to-Multipoint MPLS in Transport Networks'
<draft-ietf-mpls-tp-p2mp-framework-05.txt> as Informational RFC
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Abstract
The Multiprotocol Label Switching Transport Profile is the common set
of MPLS protocol functions defined to enable the construction and
operation of packet transport networks. The MPLS-TP supports both
point-to-point and point-to-multipoint transport paths. This
document defines the elements and functions of the MPLS-TP
architecture applicable specifically to supporting point-to-
multipoint transport paths.
The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-p2mp-framework/
IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-p2mp-framework/ballot/
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