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Re: Last Call: <draft-crocker-id-adoption-05.txt> (Creating an IETF Working Group Draft) to Informational RFC

2014-01-05 12:30:51
Hi Dave,

Yes, a statement like "Does the intended status of the document seem reasonable 
to the working group?" in Section 2.2 would make sense a lot of sense to me. 
This is what I was looking for.

I agree that the WG energy and willingness to review is somehow part of 
"working on the draft", but I still wonder whether it can be made more 
explicitly. I am not sure whether it belongs to Section 3, which is about 
authors/editors selection. WG energy also seems somehow orthogonal to most 
other sections. Here is one idea for specific text (there are other options as 
well): If it is hard to find reviewers for a given topic, the document will 
inherently move forward rather slowely... So, what about the following question 
in Section 2.2:

  * After adoption, is it likely that the document will move forward in a 
reasonable timeframe, e.g., as defined by a charter milestone? 

In general, I don't have a particularly strong opinion on my second point, and 
I don't strongly insist on a change of the draft.

Thanks

Michael

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Von: Dave Crocker [dhc(_at_)dcrocker(_dot_)net]
Gesendet: Samstag, 4. Januar 2014 23:33
An: Scharf, Michael (Michael); ietf(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org
Betreff: Re: Last Call: <draft-crocker-id-adoption-05.txt> (Creating an IETF 
Working Group Draft) to Informational RFC

Michael,

Thanks for the comments.  Responding strictly on my own behalf:


On 1/3/2014 9:32 AM, Scharf, Michael (Michael) wrote:
First, the document could perhaps mention that during the adoption of
a draft there can be a discussion about the planned status (e.g., STD
vs. EXP), even if the status can change later in the process. In
TCPM, this is almost always the case, and therefore the chairs have
to consider the planned status as one question when creating/adopting
a WG draft.

This sounds like another bullet in the Section 2.2. Criteria for
Adoption list.  Possibly:

    *  Does the intended status of the document seem reasonable to the
       working group?


Second, I am not sure if the following statement in Section 2.2 could
be detailed a bit:

*  Is there strong working group support for working on the draft?

Actually, in TCPM, the "working group support for working on the
draft" is often not the most important criteria for adoption. The key
one is the more specific question whether there indeed "working group
energy for contributing and reviewing". For instance, sometimes, we
have the following situation: The community really likes a new,
interesting idea, and the WG therefore really wants that "somebody"
works out all the nasty protocol details that a full spec would
require. This is typically left to the authors of the individual
document proposing this idea. Yet, since TCPM deals with a core
Internet protocol, having a WG document also implies that the WG
should indeed verify this spec, e.g., in all the corner cases that
can occur in a complex protocol. And, surprise, surprise, finding
volunteers for that is often more difficult than finding people that
really like an idea and want the WG to work on it... As a result, the
chairs have to think about the completion of any new WG document
quite a bit in advance...

Hmmm.  Certainly a reasonable scenario, IMO, but I would have thought
the current draft covers what you describe.

The fact that you don't see that leaves me unclear how to fix this, so
that there's no doubt it is considered a legitimate scenario.

      1. The document discusses the difference between having the
document be author-driven vs. working-driven, in Section 3.

      2. I think of the wg reviewing effort you describe as "working on
the draft" and hence qualifying under the bullet you quote.

Best I can think of is to ask you for suggested text changes/additions.


d/

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Dave Crocker
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