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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-ietf-dart-dscp-rtp-07
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 14-Oct-2014
IETF LC End Date: 14-Oct-2014
IESG Telechat date: not yet scheduled for a telechat
Summary: Ready with nits
These are very small nits to consider. Please feel free to leave the
existing text alone if these suggestions don't help.
At the end of page 13, the sentence that starts "Transport protocol
support for multiple"... is very long and hard to parse. I suspect it
will be hard to translate. The action of changing the existing protocols
is implied rather than explicit in the current wording. "current
designs" is vague. I suggest this as a starting point: "Adding support
for multiple QoS-based traffic classes within a single network 5-tuple
to a transport protocol adds significant complexity compared to the
current protocol definitions. For congestion-controlled transport
protocols, network congestion information for each QoS-based traffic
class would have to be disambiguated to allow congestion control to be
managed separately for each such traffic class." Hopefully it can be
made even simpler.
In the first paragraph of 5.2, would "Such reordering may lead to
unneeded retransmission, and spurious emission of retransmission control
signals (such as NACK) in reliable delivery protocols (see Section 5.1)"
work?