I will be tracking issues raised in this re-review. Note this, in
particular, from the last call note:
In particular, the IESG needs to know about substantive issues that have
not been addressed appropriately in this version. Comments should clearly
mark each actionable issue that they are raising, and should clearly state
what action they are asking for. Please suggest specific text, where that is
appropriate.
Let's try to keep this, as much as possible, away from small editorial
things, and raise what we consider to be significant issues with the
document. Please give *this* version a thorough review, and don't try
to use diffs from earlier versions. Is this version ready to go? If
not, what are the issues -- specifically enumerated? If your issue is
asking for a text change or addition, specifically what do you want
the new text to look like?
I'll be using the appsawg issue tracker, purely because it exists and
has the right access permissions -- this document has nothing to do
with appsawg. All issues for this document will be in the component
"opportunistic-security", here:
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/appsawg/trac/report/10
Barry