Re: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09

Thanks Alexey for the review. I'll get your requested change made. I need to 
work out how best to do this at this stage.

Thanks,
Dave

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> On Apr 8, 2015, at 10:02 AM, "Alexey Melnikov" 
> <alexey(_dot_)melnikov(_at_)isode(_dot_)com> wrote:
>
> My apologies for the very late review.
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09
> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
> Review Date: 2015-04-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-16
> IESG Telechat date: 2015-04-09
>
> Summary: Ready
>
> Major Concerns: None
>
> Minor Concerns: None
>
> Nits:
>
> In Section 2.1.1:
>
> > *  Guidance that specifies how old collected data can be to be
> >           used for evaluation.
> Either delete "can be" or "to be".