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Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02

2015-09-10 01:16:51
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Document:  draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015-9-9

IETF LC End Date: 2015-9-10

IESG Telechat date: 


Summary: This draft is almost for publication as an Standard Track  RFC.



Major issues:



Minor issues:


The document registers IKEv2-derived Shared Secret Key in section 3.2.4. Why
here and not in draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec-11.  I suggest deleting the
registration of IKEv2-derived Shared Secret Key from here. Otherwise
draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec-11 should be normative reference since the [RFC TBD]
depends on it and it may cause a delay in publication and creation of the


Nits/editorial comments:

In sections 3.1.2 and 3.2.2 the policy should be "IETF review" and not "IETF
consensus"  according to section 4.1 in RFC5226


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