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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2015-9-9
IETF LC End Date: 2015-9-10
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Summary: This draft is almost for publication as an Standard Track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
The document registers IKEv2-derived Shared Secret Key in section 3.2.4. Why
here and not in draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec-11. I suggest deleting the
registration of IKEv2-derived Shared Secret Key from here. Otherwise
draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec-11 should be normative reference since the [RFC TBD]
depends on it and it may cause a delay in publication and creation of the
registry.
Nits/editorial comments:
In sections 3.1.2 and 3.2.2 the policy should be "IETF review" and not "IETF
consensus" according to section 4.1 in RFC5226