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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-self-ping-04
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2014-09-25
IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-02
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready.
Major Concerns: None.
Minor Concerns: None.
Other Comments:
At the end of Section 1, the document says: "Each protocol listens on
its own UDP port and executes its own unique procedures." What does
"unique" mean here? What changes if "unique" is dropped from this
sentence?
Would it be more obvious to the reader the purpose of Section 6 if it
were turned into an appendix?