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This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
I have only two small editorial comments:
Figure 2 appears to be missing a couple of backslashes in the ASCII art drawing.
The sentence "This document has been written to address errata in a previous
version of this standard.” probably ought to be moved to section 2. A broader
statement in the Abstract to the effect that this document is a rewrite of RFC
4447 for publication as an Internet Standard might be more helpful.
- Ralph