Thanks, Robert, for the review.
Barry
On Mon, Feb 13, 2017 at 4:42 PM, Robert Sparks
<rjsparks(_at_)nostrum(_dot_)com> wrote:
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2017-02-13
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: Ready for publication as part of BCP 14.
I personally find the first bullet in the NEW section to be chatty,
and think it could be reduced while strengthening the message, but
enough eyes have been on this that I don't object to it going through
as is.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments: