Mike,
Thanks, look OK to me now
Roni
From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-bounces(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org] On Behalf Of Mike
Jones
Sent: יום ו 16 יוני 2017 05:16
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-jones-cose-rsa-04 addresses your review
comments, Roni. Thanks for the useful review!
-- Mike
P.S. I also thanked you in the publication announcement at
http://self-issued.info/?p=1697 and as
@selfissued<https://twitter.com/selfissued>.
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Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-jones-cose-rsa-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-05-21
IETF LC End Date: 2017-06-15
IESG Telechat date: 2017-06-22
Summary: The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
1. Section 3 first paragraph "can be find" should be "can be found"
2. IANA 5.1 table 1 and 2 missing recommended colum
3. IANA 5.3 table 4 the title is not "value" but "label"