These comments are about the values specified for the method=value:
pass, fail, softfail, neutral, temperror and permerror.
First pass:
sending domain publishes an authentication policy of some kind,
and the message passed the authentication tests
Why is a policy being required? Not all methods have policies, and some
methods can be used without a published policy.
Instead say something like
The message passed the authentication tests. (This may require
accessing an authentication policy of some kind published by the
sending domain.)
The same comments go for fail:
sending domain publishes an authentication policy of some kind,
and the message failed the authentication tests
Instead say something like
The message failed the authentication tests. (This may require
accessing an authentication policy of some kind published by the
sending domain.)
The other value definitions are different, but need to recognize that
not all authentication methods require policies. I'd suggest this rewording:
softfail
The authentication method requires a policy to be accessed, but
the policy does not require authentication of all messages from
that domain, and the message failed the authentication tests
neutral
The authentication method requires a policy to be accessed, but
the sending domain does not publish any sender authentication
policy.
temperror
A temporary (recoverable) error occurred attempting to
authenticate the sender; either the process couldn't be
completed locally because of some transient condition, or (for
methods requiring a policy to be accessed) there was a temporary
failure retrieving the sending domain's policy; a later attempt
to re-authenticate this message might produce a more final
result.
permerror
a permanent (unrecoverable) error occurred attempting to
authenticate the sender; either the process couldn't be
completed locally, or (for methods requiring a policy to be
accessed) there was a permanent failure retrieving the sending
domain's policy.
Tony Hansen
tony(_at_)att(_dot_)com
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