From: Ingvald Skaug <ingvald(_dot_)skaug(_at_)pvv(_dot_)org>
SMTP cares not what your headers may be
Here Cc: and To: field is mere delusion
The envelope bears the name of the true addressee
Keep focus on that to avoid confusion
Not bad. As a published poet (who has won awards)
and as someone who teaches writing, let me just
say that terseness is always a boon. I thus would
recommend simplifying the first line of the second
couplet to something like:
The envelope names the true addressee.
It works better with the meter, too. Just mho.
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\-d-/-m-\-a-/-n-\-(_at_)-/-n-\-e-/-t-\-c-/-o-\-m-/-.-\-c-/-o-\-m-/
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