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From: Ben Campbell [mailto:ben(_at_)estacado(_dot_)net]
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To: Hollenbeck, Scott; General Area Review Team
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Subject: Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-hollenbeck-rfc4933bis-02
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Document: draft-hollenbeck-rfc4933bis-02
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 13 July 2009
IESG Telechat date: 16 July 2009
Summary:
The draft is ready for publication. However, I have a couple
of minor comments about the implementation report at
http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFCs3730-3734_implem.txt
that may relate to the progression to draft standard.
(I apologize for not making these comments sooner--this is
the first progression to draft that I have reviewed, and only
recently had thoughts on the implementation report.)
Major issues:
None.
Minor issues:
I have a a couple comments about the implementation report. I
do not necessarily consider them blocking issues; I bring
them up merely for consideration.
-- The implementation report refers to RFC and draft versions
that are (at least) a couple of generations old. I assume
that the authors believe that they also apply to this draft,
but it would be good to have an explicit assertion of that.
-- It would help to have an explicit assertion whether the
report author believes the standard meets the requirements to
progress to draft. I think the report implies a "yes", but it
leaves the reader to draw that conclusion.
4933bis is a candidate for progression to Standard, not Draft Standard,
as 4933 is already a Draft Standard. The implementation report was
written as part of the effort to publish 3733bis (which became 4933 in
May 2007) as a Draft Standard. That's why things appear dated.
-Scott-
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