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Body extension comments

2005-03-28 10:39:01

Below are my comments on the body extension. These are all minor issues.

body comments:

Header: Fix alignment of 'Philip Guenther'

§1 ¶3 : 'specifies it syntax' -> 'specifies its syntax'

§2 ¶2 : 'with extension' -> 'with the extension'

§3 ¶1 : reformat syntax

change:

  Syntax:
         "body" [COMPARATOR] [MATCH-TYPE] [BODY-TRANSFORM]
                    <key-list: string-list>

to:

  Syntax: "body" [COMPARATOR] [MATCH-TYPE] [BODY-TRANSFORM]
                 <key-list: string-list>

§3 ¶4 : 'all "body" tests fail' -> 'all "body" tests return false'
                rationale: tests return true or false, there is no concept of 
'fail'
                
§4 ¶2 : reformat syntax

change:

  Syntax:
          ":raw"
             / ":content" <content-types: string-list>
             / ":text"

to:

  Syntax: ":raw"
                   / ":content" <content-types: string-list>
                   / ":text"

§4.2 : the term 'document' is used to refer to a MIME 'part', I would prefer using 'part' in all cases.


§4.2 ¶6 : 'decoded to prior' -> 'decoded prior'

§4.3 : just for completeness add an example.

§Appendix B: missing reference [REGEX]

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Cyrus Daboo


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