this may had problems (due to size to get into the list)
I am reforwording
abbie
-----Original Message-----
From: Barbir, Abbie [CAR:1A00:EXCH]
Sent: Thursday, August 01, 2002 9:18 AM
To: Ian Cooper; ietf-openproxy(_at_)imc(_dot_)org
Cc: Barbir, Abbie [CAR:1A00:EXCH]
Subject: RE: Comments on Architecture draft (-02)
Ian,
Thanks for the feedback.
Here is the plan,
1. I will fix the typos.
2. I will reconsider your objections on the intro.
3. I will reconsider your suggestions for the Figures.
4. The use of any rfc language without referencing it is pury
a conincidence.
5. I will provide the feedback to the callout protocol team.
5. I will update the draft to -03 ASAP.
For every one else, please send your feedback ASAP.
Regards
Abbie
-----Original Message-----
From: Ian Cooper [mailto:ian(_at_)the-coopers(_dot_)org]
Sent: Tuesday, July 30, 2002 9:29 AM
To: ietf-openproxy(_at_)imc(_dot_)org
Subject: Comments on Architecture draft (-02)
big SNIP