hi all,
attached is the arch draft -03.
I would like feedback from the list first before i submit it as a new ietf
draft.
I basically have used a lot Ian Cooper feedback to update the draft
Baisc work that was done.
1. deleted old figure 1and 4
2. changed the intro in paragraph 1.
3. changed the opes entity section
4. callout section was modified.
5. changed old figure 5.
6. changed section 2.5
7. in section 3 establishing trust changed to recommend strong
encryption/authentication always.
8. changed the summary section item 2.
please provide feedback. I will send the draft to the ietf list tuesday
morning.
abbie
draft-ietf-opes-architecture-03.txt
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