To the best of my knowledge, all new specific OCP comments that caused
no further objections/questions are now applied to the draft. That
includes a large blob of text from Hilarie Orman (posted by Abbie
Barbir). I also made a few additions/improvements. The [major] change
log is quoted below. The latest snapshot, including XML sources for
those doing hands-on modifications, is available at
http://www.measurement-factory.com/tmp/opes/
Please continue to comment and work on the to-do list. I am especially
interested in feedback regarding the new "OCP application" approach,
outlined on this list earlier.
Thank you,
Alex.
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Appendix A. Change Log
<168>
<169>
o clarified application message definition and OCP boundaries by
introducing three kinds of "applications": processor input,
processor output, and OCP application
<170>
o made "Overall Operation" a top-level section since it got long and
has its own subsections now; lots of editorial changes in this
sections, new figures
<171>
o added illustrations of OCP messages, transactions, and connections