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Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-opes-smtp-security-00

2006-08-12 09:21:09

At 05:53 12-08-2006, Markus Hofmann wrote:
We are starting WG last call on the "Integrity, privacy and security in OPES for SMTP" draft (see http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-opes-smtp-security-00.txt).

In Section 2.2 "A large number of email filters is deployed at SMTP gateways today;" should be:

A large number of email filters are deployed at SMTP gateways today;

Section 2.5 mentions "compromised OPES systems". If an OPES system mangles a message in such a way to make it undeliverable or unreadable, it doesn't mean that the system has been compromised. I suggest removing that word.

Section 3.3 has two typos, "Encrpyting" and "Beause".

Regards,
-sm