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RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-smime-x400wrap-00.txt

2000-11-07 06:45:54
Hi,

Some observations :-

1) Replace "Expires in six months" with actual expiry date.
2) Section 1, first sentence: Insert "the" between "in" and "Cryptographic"
3) Section 1.1, para 2, second sentence. add "carrying X.400 content" before
"," to read "In order to create S/MIME messages carrying X.400 content, an
S/MIME ..."
4) Section 1.3, DER definition: replace "x" with "1" to read "8825-1"
5) Section 2.4, first sentence: Insert "the" between "of" and "ContentInfo".
6) Section 2.5, para 2, second sentence: replace "CMS/X400" with "CMS-X400"
7) Section 2.5, para 5: replace "CMS/X400" with "CMS-X400"
8) Section 3.1, para 3, first sentence: replace "which is" with "wants to
be" to read "... User Agent wants to be delivered to one or more
recipients."
9) Section 3.2, para 4, second sentence: Change to "If other 8-bit
transports (e.g., X.400) are used then the optional MIME encoding SHOULD NOT
be used."
10) Section 3.4 para 2, first sentence: Replace "is-data" with "id-data".
11) Section 3.6: Can you specify the standards within the PKIX WG that you
are referring to?

Bill.