Some comments about draft-huitema-v6ops-teredo-02.txt (a couple of things
noticed during implementation):
- The Authentication indication should have an alignment requirement of 4n.
This is to prevent
unnecessary copying of RA and RS messages on platforms that have to worry
about memory alignment.
- The length of the nonce used in ICMPv6 echo requests and replies is referred
only as "a large random number" (3.4) or
just as "a random number" (5.2.9). At least a suggestion for the length of
the nonce should be given.
- In 5.2.3, shouldn't the "If these values match the IPv4 address of the
server..." be step 1) of the packet
reception procedure? Also the "If the values are different,..." refers to a
sentence in the previous paragraph. It would
be clearer just to repeat what exactly is different.
(IMHO the use of semi-colons makes the text harder to read in especially in
packet reception and transmission procedure explanations.)
Thanks,
Markku
Markku Ala-Vannesluoma
Nokia
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