W.r.t. these comments from Lynn:
.. snip ..
-- In 2.1
IAOC: Internet Administrative Oversight Committee, defined
by this document.
Should be IETF rather than Internet (especially with the current
governance discussion underway unless we really want to liven that
discussion up :-). I think the references in the document itself are
OK but I did not do a thorough check.
Yes. Changed in my edit buffer.
OLD:
<t hangText="IAOC:">
Internet Administrative Oversight Committee,
defined by this document.
</t>
NEW:
<t hangText="IAOC:">
IETF Administrative Oversight Committee,
defined by this document.
</t>
... snip ..
Minor editorial comments:
- In 3.1 6th para - delete redundant "should"
- In 3.2 1st para - delete redundant "be"
- In 4 4th para - delete redundant "as"
All fixed in my edit buffer.
Thanks for catching
Bert
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